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Wuscheline · Registriert seit: 19.08.2012

Ich weiß nicht ob das bei 4) richtig ist .
Aber wenn man 32-24 rechnet kommt man auf 8 nimmt man diese 8 und addiert 24 hinzu kommt man auf 32. die 24 rechne ich hinzu weil er vor 24 Jahren so alt war .

Kreusa · Registriert seit: 29.08.2010

Zitat:

Zitat von Bella_Schnuffi

Danke schonmal für eure Hilfe

ihr seid echt die besten

Aber bei der Vierten komm ich immernoch nicht weiter

Ok, ich versuchs mal unter der Annahme, dass das Alter des Sohnes vor 24 Jahren gemeint ist. Dann hätten wir:
x=Alter des Vaters
y= Alter des Sohnes

und die Gleichungen:
2y=x
x-24=y-24+32

Ich löse zuerst die untere nach x auf:
x-24=y-24+32 /+24
x=y+32

Dann setze ich das Ergebnis für x in die obere Gleichung ein und löse nach y auf:

2y=y+32 /-y
y= 32

Dann wissen wir, dass der Sohn 32 Jahre alt ist. Der Vater ist laut der ersten Gleichung doppelt so alt, also 64

So. Jetzt will ich ein Fleißsternchen, ich war immer ne Niete in Mathe...

Bella_Schnuffi · Registriert seit: 05.02.2012

Und bei der zweiten

Kreusa · Registriert seit: 29.08.2010

Zitat:

Zitat von Bella_Schnuffi

Und bei der zweiten

Mein Ansatz wäre da

[[2(x+5)]-4]:5=4 kriegst du es dann selbst raus?

Lupine · Registriert seit: 09.08.2009

Fleißsternchen für Kreusa

So eine Niete kannst du gar nicht gewesen sein, ist richtig!

Kreusa · Registriert seit: 29.08.2010

Zitat:

Zitat von Lupine

Fleißsternchen für Kreusa

So eine Niete kannst du gar nicht gewesen sein, ist richtig!

Dankschön

. Ich hatte so meine kleinen hellen Momente (einfache Gleichungen gehörten dazu)... zwischen dem vielen Stochern im Trüben

Jinro · Registriert seit: 24.02.2011

Da ist eine Menge dran zu tun, schon die inkonsistente Groß/Kleinschreibung des Wortes bear in den ersten fünf Zeilen. Ich lese es morgen mal richtig.

Streicher · Registriert seit: 02.08.2009

Zitat:

Zitat von Jinro

Da ist eine Menge dran zu tun, schon die inkonsistente Groß/Kleinschreibung des Wortes bear in den ersten fünf Zeilen. Ich lese es morgen mal richtig.

Das hat einen Sinn, einmal ist Bear als Eigenenname genannt und einmal nicht. Brint mir nichts, muss gleich abschicken.

Jinro · Registriert seit: 24.02.2011

Zitat:

Zitat von Streicher

Das hat einen Sinn, einmal ist Bear als Eigenenname genannt und einmal nicht. Brint mir nichts, muss gleich abschicken.

"Big Bear is a large Bear who seems tall and str..." nur so als Beispiel. Den Sinn der Namensgebung habe ich schon verstanden.

Streicher · Registriert seit: 02.08.2009

Zitat:

Zitat von Jinro

"Big Bear is a large Bear who seems tall and str..." nur so als Beispiel. Den Sinn der Namensgebung habe ich schon verstanden.

Übersehen

. Bis Morgen 17 Uhr könnte ich warten mit dem schicken.

Ecci · Registriert seit: 10.06.2010

Da muss echt ne Menge gemacht werden... zu viel für so spät abends. Nur mal als Tipp, guck dir mal die Zeitformen in deinem Text an und entscheide dich für eine... ist total inkosistent. Dann solltest du öfter auf die dritte Person Singular (also das "s"... has statt have usw.) achten, da sind einige Fehler. Dann hab ich arge Probleme mit Sätzen wie "The pictures in the book love painted with water colors". Wo ist das Prädikat? Soll hier "love" ein Prädikatsteil sein? Oder meinst du sowas wie "The pictures in the book are lovely painted with..."?
Außerdem treten weiter unten im Text immer mehr Fehler auf... z.B.: "The pictures are painted naïve and clearly they picture show us, where the Little and Big Bear are and what they do."

edit: bis morgen 17 Uhr kann man da aber sicher noch was machen

sollte man auch

Streicher · Registriert seit: 02.08.2009

Zitat:

Zitat von Ecci

Da muss echt ne Menge gemacht werden... zu viel für so spät abends. Nur mal als Tipp, guck dir mal die Zeitformen in deinem Text an und entscheide dich für eine... ist total inkosistent. Dann solltest du öfter auf die dritte Person Singular (also das "s"... has statt have usw.) achten, da sind einige Fehler. Dann hab ich arge Probleme mit Sätzen wie "The pictures in the book love painted with water colors". Wo ist das Prädikat? Soll hier "love" ein Prädikatsteil sein? Oder meinst du sowas wie "The pictures in the book are lovely painted with..."?
Außerdem treten weiter unten im Text immer mehr Fehler auf... z.B.: "The pictures are painted naïve and clearly they picture show us, where the Little and Big Bear are and what they do."
So würde ich das jedenfalls nicht wegschicken. Am besten wäre es, wenn du sowas nicht auf den letzten Drücker machen würdest, dann könnte man dir auch noch ausführlicher helfen.

Ich weiß, habs selbst gemerkt. Nur zu spät um was zu machen trifft es gerade voll.

Jinro · Registriert seit: 24.02.2011

Ich würde es ja jetzt lesen, aber der Text ist weg. Was mir noch aufgefallen ist, waren einige Sprachbilder, die es so nur im deutschen gibt.

Streicher · Registriert seit: 02.08.2009

Zitat:

Zitat von Jinro

Ich würde es ja jetzt lesen, aber der Text ist weg. Was mir noch aufgefallen ist, waren einige Sprachbilder, die es so nur im deutschen gibt.

Ich hatte noch etwas umgeändert, als ich die neue Version hochladen wollte, hat mein Internet sich verabschiedet. Hat sich jetzt sowieso erledigt.

Jinro · Registriert seit: 24.02.2011

Zitat:

Zitat von Streicher

Ich hatte noch etwas umgeändert, als ich die neue Version hochladen wollte, hat mein Internet sich verabschiedet. Hat sich jetzt sowieso erledigt.

Ach kein Ding, nix tun ist in dem Fall schöner als was tun.

Tierlover · Registriert seit: 06.01.2012

Martians are visiting us

1. Scene

Lina wakes up in the night, because she hears a noise. She looks out the window, and sees some lights, which come very fast to earth. Excited she wakes up her friend Alicia, who sleeps at Linas room.
Lina:Lilli! Wake up! Outside … there were lights on the air … I don´t know, what this is, but …
Alicia: Lina! I want to sleep, I´m tired … you have dreamed … go in your bed, okay?
Lina:No! Lilli, I haven´t dreamed! There is something mysterious! We have to look, where the lights are from …
Alicia: What do you want to do?
Lina: Let´s go out, and look, what that was. The lights came on the forest down. Do you come with me? I´m sure, that I haven´t dreamed.
Alicia: Okay … but only, because it´s you …
Lina: Thank you, you are the best … put on your clothes and then as fast as possible go there!
2. Scene

Lina waits on the door, when Alicia comes downstairs.
Lina: Are you ready?
Alicia: Yes … Lilly … Does she come with us?
Lina: Maybe it´s better. We don´t know, what there is.
Alica: I can say you, what there is: Nothing!
Lina: We´ll see this … let´s go!

3. Scene

Lina and Alicia run the road along to the forest, where Lina saw the lights came down. On a clearing they stop. There is a destroyed spaceship. Lina and Alicia don´t know, what they should say. They are speechless, and go near carefully. Lilly is restless and barks.
Lina: Psst, Lilly. I have said it! I haven´t dreamed …
Alicia: And now? What should we do? Call the police?
Lina: I don´t know.
Suddenly a loud noise sounds from the UFO. Lina and Alicia get a fright and jump back. Silence.
Lina: What was that?
Alicia shrugs ones shoulders. Lina goes near.
Alicia: Lina! Maybe there is a Martian, who will kill us!
Lina: Yes, of course!
Lina looks in the Spaceship.
Lina: You haven’t to be afraid. I want to help you!
Alicia goes carefully to Lina.
Lina: Look! He’s hurt, and is afraid. He has to come out there, so we can look at his wound. He won’t do us something, he looks so sweet. We can ... take him home. There he’ll be save. My parents will turn back next week, so nobody will see him.

Alicia: I´m not sure, if this is really clever. We don´t know anything about him. You know, in movies the Martians first look very sweet and then they eat us!
Lina: You watch too much movies! Don´t be a scaredy-cat! Come on!
Alicia: Okay, but if we´ll be eaten, I´ll never forgive you!

4. Scene

Lina and Alicia support the alien, when they walk home. They gave the alien a jacket, so it looks like he’s dressed like an alien...In the front of Linas home they meet the neighbour, who wants to take the newspaper.
Lina: Look, in a moment we are home!
Alicia: Lina! Your neighbour ... he is outside!
Lina: Quickly, go inside with the Martian. I talk with him!
Alicia goes with the Martian inside the house.
Neighbour: Wow, your friend has a great costume. In the first moment, I think, he’s a real alienJ!
The neighbour laughs. Lina smile in embarrassment. (Verlegenheit)
Lina: Yes...
Neighbour: Why is he dressed?
Lina: We ... yeah, we ... we were at a party by a friend, who has birthday...
Neighbour: Was it a nice party?
Lina: Oh Yes, it was very funny. Alicia and ... Nick, my friend, have to go to the toilet so they can’t say hello.
Neighbour: Yes, of course. So... tell your friend, that his costume is fantastic, okay? Bye Lina!
Lina: Bye!

5. Scene

In the house they take the Martian in Linas room. Lina makes the martian on his wound an association.
Lina: So it is better… can you speak?
The Martian doesn´t answer.
Alicia: Apparently not well. Let´s take him on the blanket.
Lina and Alicia take the martian on a blanket and leave him alone in the room. When he is alone in the room, he stands up, and looks around. He sees posters of Justin Bieber on the wall. He goes near.
Martian: Hey, you! How are you?
Silence.
Martian: Don´t you want to talk? Hmm … this all is so crazy. You know … we always watched the people on TV on our planet, but I always thought, they were not real. They are only a soap. But … now I´m here, and know it better. This is so crazy. And they think, I don´t can speak and understand them.
The Martian laughs.
Martian: Did I say my name? No? I´m xyzromwf2. And who are you?
Silence.
Martian: Answer! That isn´t very polite, what you do.
Silence.
Martian: You only laugh about me! Answer!
Silence.
Now the Martian is angry and tears the poster of the wall down. You see the other side of the poster with another person, Lady Gaga. The Martian is scared.
Martian: Oh, he´s transformed!
The Martian hides under the blanket.
Lina and Alicia come in the room back.
Alicia: What does he do under the blanket?
Lina laughs.
Lina: Hey, come out!
Alicia sees the poster.
Alicia: Look, Lina, he tore the poster of the wall down!
Lina: Oh no… why did he do this? Hey, shorty!
Lina takes the blanket away.
Martian: No! He wants to kill me!
Alicia: He can speak!
Alicia and Lina smile.
Lina: Yeah! But who want to kill you?
The Martian shows to the poster.
Alicia: This is a poster. A poster can´t kill you.
Martian: Really? What is a poster?
Lina: Don´t you know poster? A poster is a picture, which you can hang out on the wall, when you like this star. But you only can look at a poster; a poster doesn´t live. And so a poster can´t kill you.
Martian: Oh … I thought, I can talk with him, and he didn´t answer and then I was angry …
Lina and Alicia laugh.
Alicia: So … we have questions. How is your name?
Martian: My name is xyzromwf2.
Lina and Alicia look at each other.
Alicia: Oh… I think we call you … ääh … Shorty?
Martian: Ok… Are you real?
Lina: Of course we are real! Next question: Why do you are on our planet?
Martian: I don´t know it … I have a blackout.
Alicia: That isn´t good. But maybe later it drops again. Do you know another thing, which can be important?
Martian: No, sorry.
Alicia: And now?
Lina: I don`t know. You stay here with Shorty and I go for a walk with Lilly.

6. Scene

When Lina comes with Lilly home, Alicia eats something. Shorty tries the toilet flushing again and again and looks how and where the water flows.
Lina: What does Shorty do there?
Alicia: He thinks the toilet flushing is very interesting …
Alicia laughs.
Lina: On the clearing are a lot of people of the police and so on. Everything is blocked. It was good that we take Shorty home, who know, what they would do with him!
Alicia: Yes. And so far he was very good. We should watch TV, the news are now. Shorty is searched surely. And maybe we find out something, what can be helpful for us.
Lina nods and turns on the TV.
Lna: Ah, here is the right channel. It begins every moment. Shorty, come here and watch!
Shorty comes through the door. He, Lina and Alicia sit on a sofa and watch TV.
The neighbour, who met the two girls and Shorty on the morning, watchs TV too.

[Newscaster: And here we are with the news! Our first theme today is mysterious. On a little place name Filder City was found a destroyed spaceship on the morning. People reported that they saw lights on the air, which came very fast to earth. The Spaceship crashed in a clearing of a forest. Here a little video.
A video is showed.
You see the clearing with the spaceship and people, who examine the spaceship. A few people stand in front of the barrier.
Reporter: Visit of/from the All. What the most people have never believed, has become true. Specialized professionals have been confirmed, that this spaceship isn´t only a joke of youth, it really comes from another galaxy. It is uncertain, if a Martian really sat in the spaceship. What the visitors of the all have to look at the earth, isn´t entirely clear yet. There are different opinions about that.
Newscaster: This spaceship wasn´t the only, which has been sighted.
(Lina: Another spaceship?
Alicia: Pst!)
Not far away people saw lights on the air one hour after the first one was seen. A few people think that this is the beginning of an alien invasion. The Martians could want to look around on our planet. Everyone should take care and notify the police things, which seems strange to you.]

Alicia turns the TV off.
Alicia: We have to be carefully. The police and other people will search him.
Lina: Yes… but two spaceships… From/by who/m is the other one?
Alicia: I don´t know. An alien invasion is out of the question; that we know. Surely the other spaceship is here because of Shorty.
Lina: Yeah, you are right. Shorty, do you know something?
Shorty: Yes… I remember, what was happened.
Lina: That´s great! Tell us!
Shorty: I´m not sure, but I think, I have an argument with my Dad. I don´t know, about what the argument was, but at any rate I were very cross. So I take the spaceship of my father, and fly away. I never fly alone a spaceship before, only a few times with my Dad. It was a stupid idea. Anyhow I must not have managed any more. And then I crashed in the forest…Boom!
Alicia: And Lina saw that and woke me up, and now you are here.
Shorty: Yes. The other martian, who is landed, is surely my Dad.
Lina: Do you think, that he is very angry?
Shorty looks very scared.
Shorty: Oh yes, surely…
Alicia and Lina looks very scared at each other.
Shorty: Äh… But he won´t do your people something. We want to deal nothing with your planet. I didn´t know about you before, but I think, the adults of our planet know, that you are live here, and if they wanted to take over your planet and you, they would have done this long time ago. You would have no chance against us. But they haven´t done it. My Dad is only here because of me. I´m so sorry… He will be very angry to me…
Alicia: Hey! We all do stupid things. And we can´t change it anymore.
Lina: Right. And what do we do now?

The neighbour turns the TV thoughtfully off.
Neighbour: On the morning… there was Lina with two friends. The ´costume´ of the boy looks so real. Lina said, they were on a birthday. But why was only the boy dressed and not Lina and her friend? The martian of the spaceship who is crashed wasn´t found yet. That can´t be! Why should they take a martian home? That´s so crazy! But… there aren´t other opportunities. The boy, who goes with Lina and her friend has to be the martian. I have to call the police.
The neighbour takes his phone.

7. Scene

Shorty looks out the window.
Shorty: Oh, what´s that? That is funny!
Shorty laughs.
Lina: What is funny, Shorty?
Shorty: This bling,bling outside! The cars flash.
Lina goes fast to the window and throws a quick one look out. She looks anxiously to Alicia.
Alicia: Shit! They may not find Shorty!
Lina: We have to disappear. We can take the back door, so nobody see us.
Alicia: Yes. Shorty! Go away of the window! Come on, before the police notice …
The bell rings.
Lina throws a jacket to Alicia.
Lina: Lilly, here!
Lilly runs to Lina. The bell rings again.
Policeman: Hello! Is there anybody?
Lina, Alicia, Shorty and Lilly disappear in the back door.

8. Scene

The girls, Shorty and the dog run in the forest.
Lina: Okay, let´s take a little break.
Alicia: Yeah.
They sit on the bottom.
Lina: Just in time we are away. I don´t want introduce, what they would do with Shorty, when they catch him!
Alicia: Yes! You know, in movies the martians are examined. The brain is removed, the martian is everywhere sliced,…
Lina: That has to hurt so much! Most times they are on life and realized, what they are doing with them.
Shorty, who listen, is scared.
Shorty: Are you really thinking that they would do in the real life something like THAT?
Lina: Hmm… maybe.
Alicia: Of course they would do this! You are an unexplored creature, and crazy professors and the FBI and so on, they want to examine you! The wouldn´t only TALK with you.
Now Shorty looks to the girls startled.
Lina: Lilli, you have frightened him!
Alicia: I don´t want to lie. This is the reality.
Lina looks angry to Alicia.
Alicia: Hey, don´t look at me like that!
Shorty: Äähm… I think, I have to tell you something… but please...please don´t be angry!
Lina: What, Shorty?
Shorty: You know I´m scared of this crazy people, who want to examine me. I want to go home. I think… my Dad will be angry, but that isn´t so evilly as that somebody slice me!
Alicia: Yes, that´s clear. What do you have to tell us, Shorty? That wasn´t all!
Shorty: Do you see this?
Lina: It looks like a clock…
Shorty: Yes, you´re right. It looks similar to your clock. But that isn´t a clock.
Alicia: But what it is?
Shorty: Everybody of the youth and children of our planet have this. You have to know, that we are supervised by our parents all the time. They always know, where we are. This “clock” has a transmitter.
Alicia: A transmitter?!
Lina: But… why you don´t say that? Your Dad knows, that you are right here on this place?
Shorty: No… I was irritated of this constant marking. So I have thought up a button with one the transmitter can switch off. And I didn´t want, that Dad found me.
Alicia: Oh, Shorty … can you switch this transmitter on?
Shorty: Yeah. I do it … okay, now my Dad see where I am.
Lina: That´s good. We have to look after a hiding place. We can`t go home when Shorty is with us…
Lina, Shorty, Alicia, and Lilly go on.
9. Scene

Lina, Alicia, Shorty and Lilly sit under a little hiding place. Suddenly they hear a cracking. Shorty jumps up.
Shorty: Dad!
Dad: xyzromwf2 …
Lina: Ähh… Shorty, where is your Dad?
At this moment Dad appears exactly beside her.
Shorty: Oh sorry, I forget to tell you, that the adult ones can make themselves invisible…
Shorty looks carely to his dad.
Dad: Who are this people?
Shorty: They are my friends, they have saved me before the bad persons… Dad, it was so… so stupid of me and … I will make it okay, and you can be angry on me, but I want, that you know,…
Dad: Shut up! Yes, I´m angry! You crashed on the earth with MY spaceship! You will buy me a new one, or … I don´t know it yet, but a justified one punishes will occur me. And … I´m happy, that you are fine… I have made me provide…
Shorty: Oh, Dad! This two were very good to me…
Lina and Alicia smile.
Dad: Thank you. That wasn´t naturally, that you do this. But now, we have to go to our spaceship and fly home. Without you, you should go home too…
Lina: Yes. Bye Shorty, it was great with you!
Shorty: Right!
Alicia: I´ll never forget this day!
Lina: I´m too!
Lina and Alicia and Shorty and his Dad go away of each other and wave.
Shorty: Bye!
Lina and Alicia: All the best, Shorty! Bye!
10. Scene

Lina and Alicia are on the road to Lina´s house. The neighbor comes.
Lina and Alicia: Hello!
Neighbour: Hey! Where is your friend?
Alicia: Who do you mean?
Neighbour: Äähm… Nick!
Lina: Ah, Nick! He is home.
Neighbour: Really?
Lina: Äh, yes?! I think so?
Neighbour: And where do you come from?
Lina: We were for a walk with the dog…
Neighbour: Oh … I´m so stupid. I don´t know why, but I thought, your friend is the Martian!
Alicia: The martian, who is crashed? Why we should take him home? That´s crazy! And also… I am a scaredy-cat!
Lina and Alicia laugh.
Neighbour: Yes, I know it was a stupid idea! I´m sorry!
Lina: It´s okay. Come, Lilli, we go inside. Bye!
Neighbour: Bye!

11. Scene

On the evening Lina and Alicia looks out the window.
Lina: That was a crazy day…
Alicia: Yes! I can´t believe, what we experienced.
Lina: A real martian! And you didn´t want believe me first!
Alicia: This don´t happen every day! You wouldn´t believe it too!
Lina: Oh, look!
Lights are on the air.
Alicia: They fly home…
Lina: Let´s go in our beds. I´m so tired!
Alicia: I´m too! Good night, Lina!
Lina: Good night.
Alicia and Lina immediately fall asleep.

Das ist der Text für den Englischfilm über Außerirdische, den wir machen sollen...wie findet ihr den? Seht ihr Fehler?

Jinro · Registriert seit: 24.02.2011

Zitat:

Zitat von Tierlover

Martians are visiting us

1. Scene

Lina wakes up at night, because she hears a noise. She looks out of the window, and sees some lights, which come very fast down to earth. Excited she wakes up her friend Alicia, who sleeps at Linas room.
Lina:Lilli! Wake up! Outside … there were lights in the air … I don´t know, what it is, but …
Alicia: Lina! I want to sleep, I´m tired … you dreamed … go in your bed, okay?
Lina:No! Lilli, I din't dream! There is something mysterious! We have to see where the lights are from …
Alicia: What do you want to do?
Lina: Let´s go out, and see, what that was. The lights came on the forest down. Do you come with me? I´m sure, I didn't dream.
Alicia: Okay … but only, because of you …
Lina: Thank you, you are the best … put on your clothes and then as fast as possible let's go!
2. Scene

Mal ganz oberflächlich.

Tierlover · Registriert seit: 06.01.2012

Zitat:

Zitat von Jinro

Mal ganz oberflächlich.

Wie meinst du das?

Kreusa · Registriert seit: 29.08.2010

Ich habe den Text jetzt mal grob durchgesehen. Ich würde dir/euch empfehlen euch nochmal insbesondere die englische Zeichensetzung (da sind viele Kommas, wo im Englischen keine hinkommen) und die Verwendung von Präpositionen anzusehen (die sind an ein einigen Stellen falsch verwendet).

EDIT: Die Satzstellung ist im Allgemeinen auch noch sehr "deutsch" und klingt für mich komisch. Möglich, dass es im Englischen so auch geht, aber anders gestellt würde einige Sätze besser klingen

Tierlover · Registriert seit: 06.01.2012

Ja, ich mag Kommas im Eng nicht

Und Präpositionen mag ich auch nicht haha

Kannst du mir sagen,welche?